Is the diction appropriate in the following sentence?

"Four years later, he met and married Martha Dandridge Custis, a young widow whose husband had died."

A.No, it is too informal.
B.No, it is too opinionated.
C.No, it has redundant information.
D.Yes, it is correct as it is written.

Respuesta :

Hello,

Your question is (Is the diction appropriate in the following sentence?)

My answer is, C.No, it has redundant information. 

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